Hey everybody, I know I’m a little late to the discussion on
last week’s readings, but I didn’t want to write unless I had something to
say. (The meaning of this text
rests with you anyway, right poststructuralists?) Anyway, I'm no composition specialist, so thank you for reading despite my limitations.
Every time we discussed the best
ways to communicate genre related knowledge in our classrooms, I kept thinking
of myself as an undergrad. I was
an unfocused student, and genuinely had no desire to “connect” with my teachers
in any way. I would get to class
at the last second and think, “The moment the bell rings to go; I’m out”. If my instructors did do something
differently in the class that I knew would demand relational commitment, I
always thought, “I’m out”. In
fact, I was looking for excuses to disconnect. Thus, when we discussed creative
ideas to grant new ways of thinking about genre, I asked myself “What do we do
with those students who come with an a priori conception of class, and an
uncooperative attitude”? Can
teachers just create interest?
When I read about the
generative nature of genres, I thought, “Is that objectively so”? When students
have a comfortable approach to writing, and we aim to undo it, we will as Kill
has suggested, “face resistance” (216).
This resistance can be both good and bad. Kill quotes Lu who suggests a
“productive resistance” that arises from sensing the ability to have voice
(216). However, voice is only
appealing to those who are committed enough to speak it. When I thought of myself as an undergrad,
it bothered me that all our wonderful creative lesson plans would probably not
have worked on me. Interestingly,
Heilker’s Genre as a Way of Being, the
article that did not seem to enthrall anyone else, addressed my concerns pretty
squarely.
What worked for me as an
undergrad? When I really got into
a class, it was usually because we left the classroom environment and used our
knowledge in the public. Because of that I felt torn at how much I liked
Heilker’s article. I really respect what Bawarshi said about genre, but it was
different than Heilker. In fact, I noticed two
distinct, yet related differences between Bawarshi’s and Heilkers
articles. One difference was
ontological and the other had to do with invention. The ontological focus was brought up by Heilker (20). I would add that his perspective of
genre is positively existential. Heilker privileges the sense of becoming that
arises out of experiencing the creation and completion of an assignment. In other words, Heilker wants his
students to perform genre related learning outside the cloistered classroom in
order to experience a more real knowledge (whatever real knowledge might
be). Bawarshi dismisses
Heilker’s claim that “Writing teachers need to relocate the where of composition instruction outside the academic
classroom” and into “real rhetorical situations” by stating bluntly that the
classroom is a “real rhetorical
situation” (131-132).
Another difference concerned invention. Rhetorically,
Bawarshi addresses invention as “the world the speaker lives in” as “…not so
much an act of turning inward as it was an act of locating oneself socially, a
way of participating in shared desires, values, and meanings already existing
in the world” (104). When Heilker
addresses the way of being associated with genre, he states, “…in writing an
essay, our acts of discovery are inward journeys as much as they are outward
expeditions” (26).
So the differences were in the
questions of where and how. That
is pretty significant. I have to
side a bit with Heilker though. We
just have too much in common. I as well am an amateur in a room full of
experts, or at least people who are far more proficient than I am. I also am unafraid of being wrong or
embarrassing myself. Without
getting too biographical, I felt with Heilker”s perspectives allowed me to
“experience” the article in a profound and real way. That experience is at the heart of the difference between
Heilker’s and Bawarshi’s conceptions of genre as applied pedagogy. It also gets at what was troubling
me. I think rhetorical creation in
environments other than the classroom are not as exclusive as Heilker let’s on,
but are still more important than Bawarshi lets on. More importantly, I also think that we as teachers need to
be ready for change, but students just have to be ready as well. For
instance, Heilker describes his own experience
“I had to be sick and tired of being
sick and tired, completely beaten down, utterly defeated, hopeless, powerless,
and coming up pretty damn quick on death’s doorstep before I was willing to
read and write and dwell in these discourses” (23).
Heilker goes on to describe
experiencing a new way of being.
He is committed to the new genres and the sublime and important sense of
change that comes with a new way of being. He wants to see this in his pedagogy. Bawarshi sees becoming rhetorically
agile the goal of the assignment in class. Know how to approach a genre creatively in a few rhetorical
situations, and you learn to adjust to rhetorical situations. However, Heilker sees something
intrinsically valuable in the personal reactive experience of the moment in
situ—physically. Whatever that
experience is, is valuable to learning for Heilker. Bawarshi’s perspective is
that of the teacher trying to come along a student to help them become a better,
person/citizen/thinker. Heilker
focuses on “ideologies, values, ideas about what we should believe, what we
should want, and how we should be” (Heilker. P. 24). So both approaches to genre are value laden, but one puts
onus on the teacher, and the other sees value in existential experience of genres
both from student and teacher.
Sometimes,
rhetoric in social criticism can be pessimistic because of its understanding of
power, subjectivity, and sophistry.
When all our desires to influence become suspect, driven by capital, or
driven by oppression, the “rhetorical situation” can feel like another
expression of opportunism, and we have difficulty orienting ourselves in the
classroom. I wonder if all along,
what we were looking for was some hopeful invitation to experience the good
stuff that comes with new situations.
I think I was looking for an answer to how we motivate the disinterested
(e.g. undergraduate me). Maybe the students need what I needed—the possibility
of experiencing the existentially sublime while learning. Though I’m not
convinced yet, if new genres are capable of existential, sublime change…I’m
in.
Works Cited
Bawarshi, Anis. Genre and the Invention of the Writer.
Logan, Utah: Utah State University
Press, 2003. Print.
Heilker, Paul. “On Genres as Ways of Being.” Writing
on the Edge 21.2 (2011): 19-31. Print.
Kill, Melanie. “Acknowledging the Rough Edges of
Resistance: Negotiation of Identities for First-Year Composition.” College
Composition and Communication 58.2
(2006): 213-235. Print.
Aaron,
ReplyDeleteI'm interested in the notions of our role in the rhetorical situation of the classroom as well as our role constructing/inventing the learning environment (the syllabus being just one way of doing this). You bring up an interesting tension in our authority in the classroom, as far as genre and rhetorical situation are concerned...
I quote: "Bawarshi dismisses Heilker’s claim that 'Writing teachers need to relocate the where of composition instruction outside the academic classroom' and into 'real rhetorical situations' by stating bluntly that the classroom is a 'real rhetorical situation' (131-132).
Another difference concerned invention. Rhetorically, Bawarshi addresses invention as 'the world the speaker lives in' as '…not so much an act of turning inward as it was an act of locating oneself socially, a way of participating in shared desires, values, and meanings already existing in the world' (104)."
So back to that tension -- as Instructors, we do construct/imagine/invent the classroom to a large extent (the texts, pedagogies, approaches, organization, policies, assignments, essays/speeches, etc.), and the classroom IS a rhetorical situation in itself; do we tell students about this complex intersection? How might we create assignments regarding, start conversations about, and problematize this arrangement.
Will they understand that we have our hands in both cookie jars (my posts are revealing that I, too, like Dr. Rouzie, use "stock phrases")?! Does it even matter?
Thanks for commenting Hillery!
ReplyDeleteYou pose some great questions that I can't directly answer :P Concerning creating assignments that address the complex intersection, I really believe that the turning inward presented by Heilker is necessary as well as Bawarshi's approach. Maybe I could address it by having students write a two part paper. The original contribution would be an expression about a public discourse issue in the classroom, and then have them write about it after actually engaging in the public discourse. Maybe a comparative reflection paper? That way, if my learning objectives are: 1.) rhetorical agility, and 2.) the existential experience of genre in the public environment, I can cover both. What do you think?
I just want to say how much I love that you wrote this:
ReplyDeleteWhen all our desires to influence become suspect, driven by capital, or driven by oppression, the “rhetorical situation” can feel like another expression of opportunism, and we have difficulty orienting ourselves in the classroom. I wonder if all along, what we were looking for was some hopeful invitation to experience the good stuff that comes with new situations.
YES!